मेरे खटखटाने का जवाब आना बंद हुआ,
बस इतना ही था,
मेरा उस गली में जाना बंद हुआ ||
यह तो थी मेरी बात |
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किनसे पूछें रुकने का फलसफा यहाँ पर,
सूरज चाँद भी अंधेरों में घूमे जा रहे हैं,
एक मोड़ का फासला तय करने की हिम्मत जुटा,
हर मोड़ पर नयी मंजिल बना रहे हैं,
किनसे पूछें जीने का फलसफा यहाँ जब,
सभी जिए जा रहे हैं,
कोई आखरी मोड़ पार कर कभी रुका है क्या यहाँ,
उसी मोड़ पर पहुँचने को, सभी जा रहे हैं ||
54 comments:
I admire your ability to write such meaningful posts in Hindi. Bahut achche!! :)
"Koi aakhiri mod paar kar kabhi ruka hai kya yahaan? Usi mod par pohochne ko, sabhi jaa rahein hain."
Itni khubsoorat baat kahi hai aapne. Sochne waali baat hai ke agar asli manzil tak pohochna sambhav na ho, toh jahaan tak pohoche, usi ko manzil bana liya. :D :D
PS: How do I write in Hindi? :|
hii
these lines are lovely and deep but somewhat melancholic...
Sun and moon revolves in darkness, but it's them that makes us shine...one emitting, other reflecting...
yea...whom to ask? we all are travelling like that insect towards that illusive light...
lovely lines...
Cheers!
SUB
Bahut khoob :) Bahut hi khoob :)
Anshul hindi main to aur bhi kamaal kia yaar...Ok, I am reading it again now
[_]@ <3
Chintan
Ok, its urdu + hindi mixed...and I will meet you ate the turn :)
Why do I get the impression that this verse beautiful and melancholic as it is, is talking of a journey to the other side, the unknown shrouded in darkness/ignorance??
Jaise patange ki manzil diya ki roshni hai waise hi har rahi roshni ki talsh mein hai!!
Lovely poetry
wow hai rey!!! :-)
mast! SO MUCH TO LEARN FROM YOU!! REALLY :-)
I wish I could understand what you've written..i guess it must be something nice by reading all the comments above :):):)
Very beautiful.
and btw. I really wish to understand the picture in the b/g.
Its animated and awful.
Oh so you are a poet as well!
Clearly the last lines stole the thunder ;) A random one but expressed so beautifully nevertheless!
:) ;) Sudden poetic fever in blogworld makes me think over of giving a try to my otherwise pathetic poetry :P
Wow...that was BEAUTIFUL!
Aap to bilkul small wonder ho-there is no genre of writing that you do not excel in-especially when it comes to delving into the deep, unknown or unexplained!
Is that a characteristic style or has it evolved with writing?
Hindi poetry is much more difficult I feel because it is not just a play of rhymes-it evolves a stringing of emotions that have a melodic sense to it for the impact to come about...
Aur aisa bahut kam hota hain ki yeh haasil ho:-)
Aap ki yeh chote se kavita bahut bade baat hain:-)
@Ria
:)
@MSM
Use google transliteration tool.
@AS
Thank You.
@SUB
Thank You.
@Chintan
Thank You for the complement.
But I ate what?
@Rekha
Follow your intentions, it will lead you to light.
@Rahul
True.
@Sneha
And you too :)
@Other side of Me
Next time?
@Sonal
No matter how hard I try, I cannot explain it the way its creator would. I can't.
@Maithili
I attempt broken proses. I am no poet.
@Suruchi
I don't know, I guess it has evolved with time.
Aap log sarahna se sur khaab ke par de dete ho, itni udaan na do ke girne se bhi hichakne lagun.
Beautiful yet Meaningful....Agree with Suru.
You should write more in Hindi.
Manzilon ka peecha karte karte , har mod par mudte-mudte , bhool gaye hain ki kahan jaa rahe hain or kyon ja rahe hain, bas chalte jaa rahe hain.
Sometimes I try to find meaning in all the goals we chase and so far I've only managed to understand that its hard to find.
Beautifully expressed :)
"एक मोड़ का फासला तय करने की हिम्मत जुटा
हर मोड़ पर नयी मंजिल बना रहे हैं"
wht a beautiful piece of poetry.... i just luved it to the core.... u knw there are cirtain moments and pieces that directly strike the chords of your heart "man ka taar chuna" this post of yours was one of them... and "yeh dil maange more".... so keep writing ! Kudos dude !
you know what,
when you write in hindi there is a certain charm to it... simple plain words that speak out volumes which very seldom happens in english..!
as far as this poem goes its great and its soo charming..!
it reminds me of harivansh raibachchans poem - yatra or yatri..!
do read its great and yes following you ..! :)
hope to read more..!
I love hindi poetry, its so beautifully written...Loved it...
तुम एक ऐसे तत्त्ववेत्ता हो जिसके शब्दों की गूढ़ता को समझने में हमेशा आनंद आता है |
keep writing :)
Take care !!
mediocre hindi poem
but nice to read
you write really gud in hindi!
loved the thought in it!
har mod par hai jindagi,
hum bas himmat juta rahe hai,
kuch kismat baloon ko mil gayi hai manzil,
hum manzil to na pa sake,bas mod bana rahe hai,
jiye ja rahe hai, jiye ja rahe hai!
thnks for sharing, each one making its own path, to reach the goal!!
keep penning!
@Alka
I'll try to balance out the two. Thank You!
@Jo
They aren't hard to find, just get obscured over time. We make goals, then we make new ones in transit.
@Enigma
Mein aapki sarahna se phool nahi sama raha :D
@Suvaiba
Such is the language, Hindi :)
I will read that poem you suggested.
@Saru
:)
@Reicha
:O Dhanyawaad!
@Lioness
Thank You, I don't wish to match up with you in proses. Rookha sookha theek hai.
@mk
Jiye ja rahe hain!
I suck at hindi. S I couldn't really understand it. But the other comments gave me an idea about it :)
I like the new layout :)
Even though I only understand your Hindi posts partially yet i really like to read them... :)
reminds me of the epic lyrics 'मंज़िलों पे राहें ढूँढती चली, खो गयी है मंज़िल कहीं राहों में..'
Loved it!
I absolutely loved the first stanza.
The second one was quite profound, makes one think about where we're going, and where life takes us.
Lovely writing.
I love your blog background.
Very beautiful poem..Thse two lines are mind blowing :
किनसे पूछें जीने का फलसफा यहाँ जब,
सभी जिए जा रहे हैं,
Check my poems at www.belovedlife-santosh.blogspot.com (in Hindi).
I hope you would like.
Thanks for sharing.
@Juhi
Thank You!
@Tanishka
Thank You too!
@Richa
:)
@Ayushi
Thank You!
@Santosh
Sure, thanks for the link.
Such profound lines...I've said before and I say it again - the essence of your writing is clearly reflected in Hindi. To me it seems as like proper Hindi literature.
Nice post. :)
हिंदी की अदा ही कुछ निराली है, समा बन जाता है :)
वेअकेस्त लिंक
Kyaa baat !!!
Maza aa gaya :)
BA, ye kia likha hai? :(
I so wanna read it!
Hay..nice read, touch for me to understand few phrases in hindi :(.. anyway.. its k :)
Loved the last few lines...thats so right..Nice poem :)
@Rose
Thank You!
@Rachit
Bilkul.
@Jyoti
:)
@Urooj
Hindi likhi hai, aapke liye kabhi aur sahi.
@Pramoda
:)
@Punam
Kuch aisa hi hai. :)
@Lilangel
Thank You!
Beautiful Buddy!!
i walk,
in this crowd,
amidst this crowd,
my identity lost,
my interest in some abyss,
i don't know where i head...
all i know is i'll be a loser
if i lose my stead...
Nice post!
The world seems to have turned its face from poetry; maybe because profound thoughts are hardly melted into words these days. What you have written here rings with truth, wisdom and beauty. Utterly brilliant! Please do keep up your writing and compose more of these gems of poetry more often. Kudos, buddy!
HI Anshul,
Very Nicely expressed the feelings ,truly aesthetic.
this post being in the devangari script, i was unable to understand. i can barely read my mother tongue Urdu. but i love the fact that you are close to your roots. i am writing about blasphemy these days
bahut khoob
really a good one
It reminded me that song of SD Burman (if i am not wrong), "yahaan kaun hai tera musafir.. jayega kaha.."
i loved that :)
http://jayendrasharan.wordpress.com
@Kiran
Thanks buddy!
@A Grain of Sand
Don't loose your steadfast steed then. :)
@Ankita
Thank You, it was really a great lift.
@Vivek
Thank You.
@Aaleen
I don't write about blasphemy buddy. :)
@Chirag
Thanks
@Jayendrasharan
I'll give it a listen for sure.
Hi,
it's been a while since i have read a quality post in hindi...great stuff..
it's short and profound....two qualities that make a post truly wonderful...
and i must say you have built a very impressive blog...
http://theoxymoronworld.blogspot.com/
Aur pata nahin sabhi kyun jaa rahe hain :D
Isi baat pe ek tarana ho jaaye..
"Is modh se jaate hain, kuch sust kadam raste kuch tez kadam rahein....."
Have a nice time:)
It's past friday!
No post!? :O
Anshul, What a beautiful way to express the feelings.. Love it man.. Happy Weekend..
Someone is Special
This was a wonderful one..and I dont have words for this one...meri khamoshi mein hi mera jawab dhundlo !
TC
Kya baat! Aakhiri mod, yes, nobody can stop there no matter what!
Anshul, was quite away from blogging, so missed out on this poem of urs.
किनसे पूछें जीने का फलसफा यहाँ जब,
सभी जिए जा रहे हैं, - amazing... is what i can say to you....
RESTLESS
Sigh....
If i say this was beautiful it would be such an understatement anshul...I actually have no words for this...
Simply awesome...
liked it!
keep up writing good posts
SANTABANTA JOKES
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