Love is, really nothing,
The words had been said, but did not feel
beautiful until they came back, and corrected me, of what
should have been said before.
“So you’re taking guitar lessons?” (Pause,
silence). “Because she plays a guitar?” I interjected the purposeful pause. “That’s
good, really good.” (Long pause)
But a dream that keeps waking
me,
The best thing about very good friends is
that they mind what you say, and say it on your face. So you don’t have to mind
your words, you are free with them. Very few reach that pinnacle.
Suddenly I blurted out, “Why?
What purpose does that solve? Just to make an impression?”. Chances are that
if you two know the same instrument, you might want to settle scores, and an initial
act of love may soon find itself in wrong grounds of dominance and competition.
We all have our moments; the possibility of this situation cannot be denied.
For all of my trying, we still
end up dying,
“Why compete with her, rather, learn
something else, a keyboard, or drums, or violin. Complement her instead, so you
two could jam together someday.”
Love is the creation of music, by strumming otherwise incoherent, noise-like vibrations into a single peaceful coherent symphony. Each part, has its part to play, love.
How can it be?
That night, the words came back to me with a
minor correction, and have been with me since then.
“Don’t
compete her, complete her”
~Section in Gray: John Mayer - Edge of Desire.
29 comments:
“Don’t compete her, complete her”
Awesome lines.
Aah, there you go again :)
Nice and lovely!!
You make so much sense :)
Love this..
“Don’t compete her,complete her”
:)
Brilliant! Music and Love - two things merged in harmony, your piece covers them beautifully. :) :D
@Gargi
Thank You Gargi!
@Nil
Well, here I am, again :P
@Usama
Thank you!
@Confused Soul
Glad that you find sense in incoherence :)
@Pradeeta
:)
Ahh..an equal music! Me viewed from a different angle is 'We'and 'you' complete the picture.
.. knock knock.. awesome post.. but i think it may be not to "compete" with her but to do something she likes and wants you to do with her too; maybe in a cemetery, under millions of stars, all alone- just him nd her!
enchanting!! as always.. :)
Isn't that what we all are looking for? Someone who complements us, fulfills us and enriches our otherwise mundane existences?
You have a remarkable way with words. :)
Your incompleteness and mine, completes you and I...just like the day and night!
Simple yet a lovely post Anshul :)
Take Care
Hi Anshul, your post deserves a thumbs up! Simple words beautifully put together.
@Sharmila
Yes, the picture, hence, is justified.
@Saurav
Perhaps ;)
@Rohini
Thank You :)
@Rose
Yes, we are, but we're also too impatient to be lured into traps.
@Fatima
Thank You :)
@Yasha
Heyy, look who's back, How are you doing Yasha? :D
beautiful...profound...you never disappoint.
That truthfulness and bluntness..
said so softly that you can't help but admire at the words.
Not just admire, but take them to heart.
Anshul..another great post.
uhh but y make an assumption she is incomplete!
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Wow, it's almost like one of those stories oft repeated, that have a moral...
The closing lines are awesome-
"Love is the creation of music, by strumming otherwise incoherent, noise-like vibrations into a single peaceful coherent symphony. Each part, has its part to play, love."
I take this-Perfect!:-)
Needless to say, I loved the post...
I too feel good when when I'm corrected...not out of some mar feeling but when the other person actually cares...and no doubt..it makes me feel special......
Very aptly said-don't compete....rather complete...but here I think its not competition... when you love someone...you start liking every small thing about him/her...and end up trying it yourselves :P
I must say I like your style
@Purba
Thank you! :)
@Kunal
thank you :)
@Sadiya
To feel good considering that you are important? :D
@Pradeeta
Thank You :)
@Suruchi
:) You made my day !
@Saumya
Is that so? Very well :D
@Phoenixritu
Thank You!
Beautiful lines :)
So subtle and so romantic :)
Love.
That incoherent thing that makes everything else wallop in coherence that only a pair of hearts can decipher.
Being completed by somebody, or being that somebody who completes someone...inst it such a divine privilege a very blessed few have?
Loved the post Anshul.
Call me cynical but I am not sure of this complete business.
I would have preferred the complement lines you had chosen earlier itself.
I love the phrase you use here:
Love is the creation of music, by strumming otherwise incoherent, noise-like vibrations into a single peaceful coherent symphony. Each part, has its part to play, love
Well said. :)
I loved the way you brought the whole idea. Beautiful thought and written in such a language that it touches heart.
Thank you for this one.:)
your words give birth to more emotions... thank u!
Like that reflection.... ME becomes WE
A short post but really heart touching. Its true that sometimes some simple incidents of our lives teach us some very important lessons.
That one line!!!!
Great post :)
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